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FAITH said...
this is a good paper....however i think u should let it flow more. your idea are presented like it in bullet pionts. try to plug in the topiccs to make it flow and its clear that your opionions are strong and thats good...ooHH yeaaaa
March 30, 2007 10:33 AM
posted by FAITH @ 10:34 AM
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Faith,
Good advice. Give a specific example of a bullet point and what could be added and elaborated. That would make it much more better, you dig?
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