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your paper is at a good start....i think you should go within dept of explaning about the animals being killed for making fries and hamburgers.since you mentioned so much about that...other than that i think it is good!!!

March 30, 2007 10:49 AM

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FAITH said...
this is a good paper....however i think u should let it flow more. your idea are presented like it in bullet pionts. try to plug in the topiccs to make it flow and its clear that your opionions are strong and thats good...ooHH yeaaaa

March 30, 2007 10:33 AM